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**FIRST piece of persuasive writing** Smoking Should Be Banned

Smoking who is sick of smoking? Anyone!!! Well I am. I`m sick of getting coughs, colds and being ill. Early Death is horrible, Medical problems are life ruining and second hand smokers. I`m always disgusted having to sit next to a smoker and lung cancer and getting my life cut short. It`s time to stop.

One of the reasons why smoking should be banned because It causes Life to get cut short. Short life is horrible because It only happens when your heart and lungs have had enough and thats when it becomes very slow and painful. Your life cut short isn`t just 2 years it`s actually much longer, you can die up to 14 years earlier!!! That`s a lot

another reason why is because it causes a lot of medical problems such as heart disease, Blindness, lung cancer and theres so much more that if i tell you the rest you will probably fall asleep any way you will have the most painful death and you might have to stay in the hospital and live a miserable and painful life.

My last but not least point is... second hand smoking affects children, babies, your friends and family. They can get really sick and have a higher chance of getting lung cancer and all of the other reasons I talked about, Thats not fair. Also if children breath to much tobacco in they could get ill or be at risk of lung cancer.

So If you want yourself, friends or family to be of lung cancer. Than think twice about this argument. Smoking should be banned. Second piece of persuasive

Police are cool !!!

Police are cool!!! Who does`t think police are cool? Well I think they`re cool because they stop criminals, help people and they are respectful and kind.

One of the reasons why police are cool is because they help people. They save your lives, stop bad things happening to you and make that you can live safely and afford to pay for yourself to have food and shelter.

Another reason why police are cool is because they stop criminals from murdering, stealing and speeding. If we did not have police there would be criminals everywhere.

My last reason is because there respectful and kind because they always say please or thank you when they get told something valuable that may help their investigation looking for a criminal. so anyone who still hate police than read this statement again and if you still think bad about police not my problem and anyone who is following this argument good on ya Police are cool.



Here is some work we did with Mr Scott!!!

The Jubilee pool

All is calm. Everyone is sitting on the side eager to jump in listening to the instructions. NO DIVING OR BOMBING ONLY JUMPING. You could hear a silent groan of the crowd as they heard the upsetting news. In you get he shouted.

**Splosh**, **Splash Everyone is pouncing into the water. It`s madness. People kicking, people floating and teachers dodging the splatters from students splashing.**
It starts to calm down when all of a sudden the teacher say FREE TIME. screaming shouting started up again now it`s worse than before. The never ending madness!!! Until the whistle blows.

By Daniel